How's my driving?

I'm admittedly still ironing the kinks out of this guy. If his characterization seems inconsistent, it's probably me trying to make him less shitty/stuish/whatever I need to do, but if you've got crit or just general advice, hit me! As long as it's constructive and not just "hurr durr you smell," I take everything people have to say to heart and will do my best to make use of it. Screening is off, anon is on, IP tracking is disabled. Go crazy, folks.